Letter of Introduction for a Job: When to Send One

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A letter of introduction introduces you to someone who was not expecting to hear from you. There is no vacancy to answer and no application to submit. Its job is to open a conversation, and the thing it asks for is a reply, not a decision.

That single change — asking for a conversation instead of a job — is what separates it from every other document in a job hunt, and it is the reason people write bad ones. They take a cover letter, remove the reference number, and send a formal application to someone who never opened a vacancy.

What is a letter of introduction?

The phrase covers two related documents, and it saves confusion to name both before going further.

Both are covered here, because they come as a pair. The most effective version of the second is one you wrote yourself and handed to the person introducing you.

It is also worth separating two neighbours it gets confused with. A letter of recommendation vouches for your past performance and is aimed at a decision that is already being made. A letter of interest is a specific type of introduction, sent cold to a company with nothing advertised — that case has its own article at /blog/letter-of-interest, so this page treats it briefly and spends its length on the two cases that article does not cover.

How is it different from a cover letter?

In almost every dimension, and the differences all descend from one fact: a cover letter is read by someone who asked for it, and an introduction is read by someone who did not.

A decision tree with one question at the top: is there an advertised job you are applying for? The Yes branch leads to a box labelled Cover letter, described as answering a posted vacancy against its requirements. The No branch splits into three further boxes according to how you reached the person. Somebody is introducing you leads to Letter of introduction, referral version, whose ask is a short call. You picked the company yourself, cold, leads to Letter of interest, whose ask is to be kept in mind. You already work there leads to Letter of introduction, internal version, whose ask is a conversation before a role is posted. A note along the bottom reads: all three of the no branches ask for a conversation, not a decision, which is the difference that changes the writing.
The document follows from how you reached the reader, not from how badly you want the job.

When is a letter of introduction the right document?

Four situations, and you can tell them apart by asking who put you in front of this reader.

And one situation where it is the wrong document: a job has been posted and you write an introduction instead of applying. That reads as an attempt to skip the queue, and it usually ends with somebody politely sending you the link to the advert.

What goes in it, and why?

Six parts. Each one exists to survive a specific objection the reader is forming as they read.

The mechanism behind the last one is worth being explicit about. Every ask has a cost to the reader, and they will compare that cost against the cost of doing nothing. "Please consider me for a position" is expensive: it requires them to think about headcount, budget and process. "Could I ask you two questions about how your team handles customs holds?" is cheap, and can be answered in the reply itself. Cheap asks get answered, and an answered email is a relationship.

A referral introduction, written out

The strongest case. Everything invented below is an example.

Subject: Introduction from Priya Raman — customs and EU road freight

"Dear Mr Bakker, Priya Raman suggested I write to you. She and I worked together at Meerkade Forwarding for three years, and she mentioned that Havenlijn has been building out its customs side since the spring. I am a logistics coordinator in Rotterdam, six years in, and customs is the part of the job I have specialised in. At Meerkade I rebuilt the declaration checklist after a run of border holds on our German lanes; the holds stopped, and the checklist is still the one the team uses. What I noticed about Havenlijn is that you are running your own declarations rather than outsourcing them, which is unusual at your size and is exactly the setup I would want to work in. I am not writing to ask about a vacancy. I would like twenty minutes on a call in the next two weeks, mostly to understand how you have structured the customs team and whether that is a direction I should be building towards. If it is easier, I am happy to send two questions by email instead. Either way, thank you for reading. Best regards, Sarah Okonkwo — [email protected], +31 6 12 34 56 78"

Around two hundred words. The referral is the first sentence, not a postscript. There is one piece of evidence with a result attached to it. The observation about the company is something you could only know by having looked. And the ask is twenty minutes, with a fallback that costs the reader even less.

The letter you write for the person introducing you

When a contact says "I'll introduce you", they usually mean it and then get busy. The reason nothing happens is not indifference, it is that writing an introduction is work: they have to remember what you do, decide what to say about you, and take responsibility for the recommendation.

So remove the work. Send them a short, forwardable note they can paste, edit or ignore. Make it easy to edit by keeping it plain and unflattering — a person will not forward a paragraph that praises you more than they would.

"Hi Priya, thank you for offering to introduce me to Joost Bakker. So it is not extra work for you, here is something you could paste and change however you like: 'Joost — Sarah Okonkwo worked with me at Meerkade, coordinating EU road freight and running our customs declarations. She is the person who fixed our German lane holds. She is looking at where to take the customs side of her career next, and I thought a twenty-minute conversation with you would be useful to her. Introducing you both here.' Obviously say whatever you actually think. And if the timing is bad, no problem at all."

Tip: The last sentence is not politeness. An introduction offered under mild social pressure is a worse introduction, because the person making it hedges. Giving a real exit makes the ones you get more enthusiastic.

A speculative introduction, written out

No referral, nothing advertised, so the letter has to earn attention on its own. The full treatment of this case is in /blog/letter-of-interest; the short version is that everything rests on the paragraph proving you chose them specifically.

Subject: Coordinator with customs experience — Rotterdam

"Dear Ms de Vries, I am writing to introduce myself rather than to apply for anything, since I cannot see that you are hiring. I coordinate EU road freight for a mid-sized forwarder in Rotterdam and I handle our customs declarations in-house. Two things brought me to Kaaipoort. You publish your delay figures by lane, which almost nobody does, and your growth over the last two years has been in the direction I want to be working — perishables, where a hold is not just an inconvenience. The most useful thing I have done in my current job is unglamorous: I rebuilt our declaration checklist after a run of border holds, and the holds stopped. Perishables is where that work is worth the most. If it is useful, I would welcome twenty minutes on a call to hear how you handle declarations, and I am glad to be kept on file if there is nothing now. My CV is attached in case it is easier to read. Thank you for your time. Best regards, Sarah Okonkwo"

The opening line is doing something specific. Saying plainly that this is not an application defuses the reader's first defence, which is the assumption that they are about to be asked for a job they do not have.

An internal introduction, written out

The internal case has a different risk profile from the other two, and this is what people get wrong. Externally, the worst outcome is silence. Internally, the worst outcome is your current manager hearing about it from somebody else.

So handle the sequence before you handle the letter. If your organisation expects you to tell your manager before approaching another department, tell them. If it does not, decide anyway whether you would rather they heard it from you. And keep the letter free of anything that reads as a complaint about your current role, because it will be forwarded.

Subject: Introducing myself — interested in the customs side

"Hi Tomas, we have not met — I am in the road freight coordination team on the second floor, three years in, and I report to Elena Sandberg. I wanted to introduce myself because the part of my job I have specialised in has drifted towards yours. I run the customs declarations for our German and Polish lanes, and I rebuilt the checklist last year after the run of holds we had in March. Elena knows I am writing to you. I am not asking about a vacancy and I know there may not be one. What I would find genuinely useful is half an hour to understand how your team is structured and what you would want to see from somebody moving across from operations — including if the honest answer is a qualification I do not have yet. Any time that suits you in the next couple of weeks. Thanks, Sarah"

Three things are doing the work. Naming her manager and stating that the manager knows removes the political question from the reader's mind. Asking what would be wanted from her, rather than announcing that she is ready, makes it a conversation the other person can win. And inviting the discouraging answer is what makes the flattering one believable.

Weak lines and their rewrites

Openings. Weak: "My name is Sarah Okonkwo and I am writing to express my keen interest in your esteemed organisation." The reader has learned nothing and the sentence is about you. Rewritten: "Priya Raman suggested I write to you." Or, with no referral: "You publish your delay figures by lane, which is why I am writing."

Relevance. Weak: "I have always admired your company's commitment to excellence and innovation." This is true of every company and therefore says nothing. Rewritten: "You are running your own declarations rather than outsourcing them, which is unusual at your size."

Evidence. Weak: "I am a hard-working team player with excellent communication skills and strong attention to detail." Four claims, none checkable. Rewritten: "I rebuilt our declaration checklist after a run of border holds, and the holds stopped." One claim, and an interviewer can ask about it.

The ask. Weak: "Please do not hesitate to contact me should any suitable opportunities arise." This asks the reader to remember you indefinitely, which nobody does. Rewritten: "Could I ask for twenty minutes on a call in the next two weeks? If email is easier, I have two questions."

How should you send it?

The check before you send it

An introduction that gets a twenty-minute call has done its whole job, even if the call produces nothing that month. Vacancies arrive later; being someone the reader has already spoken to is what makes the difference when one does. If a role does get posted, the document changes and /blog/cover-letter-format-guide covers what to write then, with /blog/resume-format-guide for the CV you attach.

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